Dark Angel..
they say, why cry?
when angels deserve to die?
pretty girl's an angel..
that burned her wings..
with a sign
hanging haphazard..
around her neck..
do not disturb!!
lovely one has fallen..
thrown herself away...
onto the thorns
and shed her wings
to play with demons?
yet they still
refuse to believe!!
they call her the dark angel..
* Bright white, acid-free sketching paper with slight surface texture (Bienfang) * Charcoal leads/pencils (Derwent) * Graphite Chunk (General's) * Fabric paint (Camel-Black) *
posted by roadhouse blues at 1:54 PM
1 Comments:
dis 1s gud too..wonder wht made u write it tho..cudn pinpoint d emotion..ur d better judge..is it pain,frustration,mockery or helplessness..i found it borderin btw helplessness n mockery not too sure tho.
felt it cudv been made more intense 2give a stronger effect...n as i said earlier..acc 2me reduce d no of exclamations! jus try readin it vidout dem..it sounds so much better.
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