i wont say goodbye anymore...
the most beautiful sound,
the sound of a beating heart..
showing there is still life..
somewhere in the body..
feeling the steady rhythm.
inside of someone..
seemingly being close enough..
to touch their hearts..
a weird feeling of calm comes over..
and relaxes the body..
feeling not only life..
but everything from pain to joy..
not understanding it..
yet, being close enough to grasp it..
ok, that was her heart..
then one day, impedance!!
the story got over..
much mchh before the hiatus!!
i wont say..
i wont say goodbye anymore.. .
silence..
fin..
* Bright white, acid-free sketching paper with slight surface texture (Bienfang) * Charcoal leads/pencils (Derwent) * Graphite Chunk (General's) * Fabric paint (Camel-Black) *
posted by roadhouse blues at 11:23 PM
3 Comments:
Still amazed at the good work being done! Keep at it n enjoy the weekend...my stuff is at http://sillygloop.spaces.msn.com/
dis poem is diff 4m d rest...has a undercurrent of hope, of optimism..a demarkation 4m ur other works..
d concludin lines r even better..a climax unexpected..vidout d usage of exclamation marks...m stunned..
hmmm... something so beautifully romantic... sad-ish.. but yet hopeful and strongggg!!
i like it!!
Smriti
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